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Salamence
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|  | Salamences First Fan Fic
« Thread Started on Sept 9, 2004, 4:26pm » | |
this is through nobodys point of veiw
There are no mushy parts in this one if you know what i mean but that will come in the near future that is if you like this one and dont go balistic if i spell scuicune or any other words for that matter wrong a little foreshadowing there huh?Also togepi is not in this fan fic and pikachus roles will emerge in future additions to story
we join our heros walking in the forest
"im hungry" says ash
"oh would you stop complaining you just ate" snaped Misty
"i cant help it im starving" Ash retorted in agony
"would you two chill out we can have lunch early" brock sugested
They sat down by a river and brock made some of his no chew stew.
Ash gave pikachu some ketchup (a/n: I just HAD to throw that in there)and being the only one hungry ash ate all the stew.
"come on we need to get moving again if we are going to make it to the next town before dark"Brock said "its about twenty miles away"
They continued towards the town following the river for as far as they could about 6 miles into there walk
Misty says "wait" "did you hear that"
"Hear what?"
"Look"
"Cool"
There Was a blue and purple pokemon purched on a rock before them
Ash took out his pokedex And said "lets see what dexter has to say"
"Suicune the Aurora Pokemon this devine Water pokemon blows around the world, Always in search of a pure resevoir"
Misty Says 'a water type huh?" "im going to catch it"
Oooh Cliff hanger will she catch it?
probably not but this is my fan fic so she could
tell me what you think but unless everyone hates it ill be putting up another part to it regardless because i alredy have more to it
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| | Re: Salamences First Fan Fic
« Reply #1 on Sept 9, 2004, 7:32pm » | |
dont worry as i write more the storys will improve also you probably wont see team rocket in all my storys either
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| | Re: Salamences First Fan Fic
« Reply #2 on Sept 10, 2004, 10:21pm » | |
Advice:
*Needs to be longer!
*More romance
*And make it more interesting
Final Rate:
6/10
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« Reply #3 on Sept 10, 2004, 10:36pm » | |
this is only the first part man its not done im going to keep editing it
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« Reply #4 on Sept 10, 2004, 10:37pm » | |
i wanted to make sure somebody even cared before i continued
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« Reply #5 on Sept 18, 2004, 9:35pm » | |
Just Then scuicune started running and it jumped across the river
"youre not getting away from me" she shouted
she put her bag down and jumped in the river and climbed up on the other bank and ran after it
"Hey Brock how does she expect to catch it if she left all her pokemon in her bag"ash said
"Beats me" brock responded
meanwhile
"whered it go dang it i lost it"about to head back in disapointment she saw a pond
"hey it might have went over there" she said to herself as she ran towards the pond
She runs over to the pond and sees a flash of purple and blue on the other side
"there you are come on out Star.....me..ah where is my bag where are my pokemon""ah just my luck"
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